Poem : Haiku for my brother on his birthday 3.14

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I love you, Brother.

I survived because of you,

The story unfolds…

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  1. Foolchund Saahil says:

    Haiku is surely very short and does not offer scope to delve much deeper. But I love it because of its complexity. Your Haiku is very emotional in nature and shows your love for your brother. Few people happen to impress with Haikus and I must say you are among them. It makes me curious to know further. You sure know how to channel your readers. Thank u for such beautiful cause your little words said much in terms of feelings.

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    1. Thank you Foolchund, it takes a compassionate person to notice and appreciate simplicity and find the deeper feelings. I really appreciate your sensitive nature.

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